You changed it all! Kidding, but you really did a nicer job with fast editing their responses so it doesn't drag on & on.
The one thing I really felt was awkward & out of place was the grandmother's song in the middle of the doc, at first I thought it was over but then there was more commentary.
By removing some material and boning this down, I think you have made a very wonderful documentary Juli!! Great job.
ReplyDeleteHey Juli, adding the b-roll clips really gives this version a better pace that keeps the viewers interest. Well done.
ReplyDeleteNice edits you made with adding pictures.. and taking some footage out.. good job
ReplyDeleteYou changed it all! Kidding, but you really did a nicer job with fast editing their responses so it doesn't drag on & on.
ReplyDeleteThe one thing I really felt was awkward & out of place was the grandmother's song in the middle of the doc, at first I thought it was over but then there was more commentary.
Thanks guys,
ReplyDeleteI really had a great semester with you all and hope to see you in the fall, if not sooner!